The graph shows the information about the UK birth rates for women from 1973 to 2008

Essay topics:

The graph shows the information about the UK birth rates for women from 1973 to 2008.

The line graph given provides a comparison of the number of births given by Britain women in different age groups in a 35-year period since 1973

From an overall perspective, it is evident that the rate of births given by women aged from 30 to 39 showed an upward trend, whereas a reverse pattern could be observed in the others over the year shown

At the beginning of the period covered by the graph, the number of births given by the 25-29 age group ranked the first, at almost 140 births per 1000 people. Those from 20 to 25 and the 30-35 age group were lower, at just over 120 and under 80 respectively. Twice as many births were given as under 20 and 35-39-year-old women, at 60 compared with 40. However, the figures for the over 40-year-olds accounted for the lowest, at nearly 20 births

In the period from 1988 to 2008, there was a significant decrease in the birth rate of the under 20, 20 to 25 and over 40 age group, at 40, under 100 and 10 respectively. Having fluctuated around 130 births, the proportion of births given by the 25-to-29-year-old then ended at 120 births. A similar amount of the birth rate of the 30-35 and 35-39 age groups was witnessed. Another interesting point is that the figures for the 35-39-year-olds surpassed the under 20 age group and then finished at over 60 births

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31666666667 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19374109685 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508333333333 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6666666667 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.111111111 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23374379074 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123108481513 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837758847267 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178672304194 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571243203655 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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