The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in 3 different countries.
The given graph summarizes information about the percentage of people over the age of 65 in Japan, Sweden, and the USA during the 100-year period from 1940 to 2040. Overall, in all of the 3 countries mentioned, there will have been an upward trend in the proportion of older people.
Throughout the first 40 years, from 1940 to 1980, there was a similar increasing tendency in the ratio of old citizens in both Sweden and the USA, which went from over 5% to 14%, and 9% to 15%, respectively. From 1980 to the end of the 2020s, the old population rate in Sweden will have fluctuated in an upward direction from around 14% to below 20%, whereas the ratio in the USA will have been more stable to drop a little and then rise to over 15%. From then on, the 2 figures will continue to grow to 25% and 24%, respectively.
Japan, however, experienced a decrease in aged 65 and over population proportion in the first 20 years to only around 3%. The figure then remained the same until around the end of the 1980s. Subsequently, to the end of the 2020s, the percentage will have continued to rise steadily to 10%, and then will soar almost vertically to reach the rate of 25% in the 2030s. In 2040, the ratio will peak at around 26%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42731277533 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46928776304 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502202643172 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8967407741 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169102028297 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774925786359 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916178630312 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137121378457 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672047952822 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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