The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions.

Essay topics:

The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions.

The line chart shows the change in the population in the world from 1800 to 2100 and the bar chart depicts the urban population in developing regions and developed regions from 2015 to 2040. Overall, the world population and the number of people living in cities in developing regions is predicted to increase, while the population residing in cities in developed regions is projected to remain unchanged throughout the period shown.

Looking at the first chart, in 1800, the world population was 1000m of people, this figure then rose gradually to 3000m of people in 1960. In the following years, a sharp predicted growth can be seen in the number of people in the world, peaking 8000m of people in 2040 before a slight drop to 6000m of people in 2100.

Turning to the bar chart, in 2015, just over 2000m of people living in cities in developing regions, close to 1500m of people residing in urban areas in developed regions. However, by 2040, experts predicted that the urban population in developing regions will rise gradually to 4000m, while those in developed regions will level off over the period of 25 years.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'look', 'then', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227488151659 0.268076937826 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.132701421801 0.116061578633 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0568720379147 0.0759168565197 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0284360189573 0.0366838410393 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.194312796209 0.155750635184 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0710900473934 0.0379272487307 187% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.46564942426 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.042654028436 0.0210936926555 202% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00473933649289 0.00175180941692 271% => OK
Determiners: 0.104265402844 0.0948980150116 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0142180094787 0.00437022459523 325% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1121.0 1161.00487805 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.9 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83854166667 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369791666667 0.337110787985 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21875 0.247514529752 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15625 0.171178102325 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125 0.112407865282 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46564942426 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484375 0.546246751206 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.703521561 49.3433353143 82% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0094962315 139% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9300285591 42.9750493124 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.833333333 135.714022679 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 23.0094962315 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.689975730869 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 53.875 47.7609492067 113% => OK
Elegance: 3.05882352941 2.94281807926 104% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266438283044 0.418131533498 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.342399241659 0.181151798455 189% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0671059618675 0.0850326197045 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.853259465052 0.706616315825 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0388911108774 0.157042692854 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191284053828 0.228904883108 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563361831938 0.108899403657 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.523871011879 0.367819155151 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0133776572896 0.0812612215331 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220701002487 0.316326947829 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600468965147 0.0921553760075 65% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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