The graphs below show the unemployment rate of citizens in the US with a further classification displaying average salary per week in 2005.
Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of unemployed citizens in the US due to their degree percentagewise along with the table which provides information about the connection between personal degree and average salary earned weekly in the year 2005. Overall, there is a strong relationship between the level of degree and the unemployment rate. It is clear that people with lower level of education are more likely of being unemployed.
Looking at the table in more detail, it can be seen that the person with professional degree earned the greatest wage (1800$), followed by 1740$ and 1560$ made by people with doctoral and master's degree respectively, while the smallest salary got people with less than a high school diploma (538$). The figures for the US citizens with bachelor's degree accounted for 1246$, compared to 840$ earned by Americans with no degree and 701$ made by people with high school diploma.
With regards to the bar chart, just above 8% of Americans with less than a high school diploma were unemployed and the unemployment rent decreased with the rise of the degree's level until a tiny minority (just above 1%) of people who has professional or doctoral degree were classed as unemployed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of ...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1800'.
Suggestion: $1800
...ssional degree earned the greatest wage 1800$, followed by 1740$ and 1560$ made by pe...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1740'.
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...ed the greatest wage 1800$, followed by 1740$ and 1560$ made by people with doctoral ...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1560'.
Suggestion: $1560
...atest wage 1800$, followed by 1740$ and 1560$ made by people with doctoral and master...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$538'.
Suggestion: $538
...le with less than a high school diploma 538$. The figures for the US citizens with b...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1246'.
Suggestion: $1246
...ens with bachelors degree accounted for 1246$, compared to 840$ earned by Americans w...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$840'.
Suggestion: $840
...degree accounted for 1246$, compared to 840$ earned by Americans with no degree and ...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$701'.
Suggestion: $701
... earned by Americans with no degree and 701$ made by people with high school diploma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02487562189 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64382809284 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547263681592 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7083232053 43.030603864 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.333333333 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14499283677 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851808095903 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420748612911 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110964223847 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390261820745 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.