The graphs illustrate weather conditions in Brasilia and Recife.In Brasilia, rainy season starts in November and lasts until January, when at least 21 days a month are wet. In Recife, it lasts for five months lasting from April until August, with a minimu

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The graphs illustrate weather conditions in Brasilia and Recife.
In Brasilia, rainy season starts in November and lasts until January, when at least 21 days a month are wet. In Recife, it lasts for five months lasting from April until August, with a minimum of 21 rainy days as well. The temperature in two cities is also different. In Brasilia, for instance the average annual temperature is between 20-25 degrees Celsius, with daily high at 37 degrees in August and daily low at almost 0 degrees in June, while climate in Recife can be considered as more tropical with an average annual temperature fluctuating between 25-30 degrees and daily high and low at 40 and at 15 degrees in February and June respectively.
Moreover, Brasilia is a more thunderous place, as the number of days with thunder from October till March fluctuates between12 and 16, while in Recife the maximum number of days with thunder is 3. Furthermore, Brasilia is a sunnier place, where it shines at least 4 hours a day, while in Recife sunshine can be seen for 3 hours in August.

The graphs illustrate weather conditions in Brasilia and Recife.

In Brasilia, rainy season starts in November and lasts until January, when at least 21 days a month are wet. In Recife, it lasts for five months lasting from April until August, with a minimum of 21 rainy days as well. The temperature in two cities is also different. In Brasilia, for instance the average annual temperature is between 20-25 degrees Celsius, with daily high at 37 degrees in August and daily low at almost 0 degrees in June, while climate in Recife can be considered as more tropical with an average annual temperature fluctuating between 25-30 degrees and daily high and low at 40 and at 15 degrees in February and June respectively.

Moreover, Brasilia is a more thunderous place, as the number of days with thunder from October till March fluctuates between12 and 16, while in Recife the maximum number of days with thunder is 3. Furthermore, Brasilia is a sunnier place, where it shines at least 4 hours a day, while in Recife sunshine can be seen for 3 hours in August.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, at least, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62251772994 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548913043478 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.114634146341 1745% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.377455669 43.030603864 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465623973817 0.215688989381 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.26955421304 0.103423049105 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.241271277501 0.0843802449381 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306356260501 0.15604864568 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117493286003 0.0819641961636 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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