The line graph reveals how much count(in millions) of the population size,birth and death rate of England and Whales between year 1700 and 2000.
Overview,the population size was inclined highly with the passage of time, while equality were noticed in the case of death and birth rate up to last second year but birth rate was rose in last given year.
According to the graph,in initial year population size was near around 2 million but it suddenly increased by 10 million in year 1750. After the population size reached at peak point some fluctuations were observed from 1800 to 1850. Suprisingly,the death rate and birth same remained same up to year 1830 with approximately 2 million diffrence between both of them.Before the rate of birth declined to 22 million,it gradually increased by 1o million and death rate was remained stable from 1950 to 2000.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , birth
... countin millions of the population size,birth and death rate of England and Whales be...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... between year 1700 and 2000. Overview,the population size was inclined highly wit...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...st given year. According to the graph,in initial year population size was near a...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y increased by 10 million in year 1750. After the population size reached at peak poi...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... observed from 1800 to 1850. Suprisingly,the death rate and birth same remained same...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Before
... million diffrence between both of them.Before the rate of birth declined to 22 millio...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...the rate of birth declined to 22 million,it gradually increased by 1o million and d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01388888889 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67356601694 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8092098288 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.4 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383275906761 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225925212148 0.103423049105 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15945715636 0.0843802449381 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317696355159 0.15604864568 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156482740782 0.0819641961636 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.