The line graph shows immigration to USA Canada and Australia from 1990 to 2010

Essay topics:

The line graph shows immigration to USA, Canada and Australia from 1990 to 2010.

The line chart illustrates the number of people who immigrated in the USA, Canada and Australia over the 11-year period, starting in 1990.

Overall, it can be seen that the number of immigrants in the USA showed a significant rise over the time period, whereas the immigration to Australia experienced a downward trend. However, immigration to Canada were fluctuated in the following years.

According to the graph, it is evident that in 1990, the highest number of people immigrated to Australia at a figure of 2700, after that it was dropped dramatically to about 500 in 1995. Afterwards, it remained constant until 2001. Moreover, immigration to the USA was accounted at 1100 in 1990, and then it was increased rapidly at 2500 during the period.

At the beginning of the period, Canada received 500 immigrants, and then the number of immigrants rose significantly around 2300 in 1995. After that it showed a dramatic decline in 1996, thereafter it remained a steady line until 1999 and that figure was about 1100. End of the period, immigration to Canada was grown moderately around 1600.

Votes
Average: 7.4 (6 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06043956044 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83517015929 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8524202681 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341376170026 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140164400714 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838215719112 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228883335508 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617558055433 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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