The line graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year.

Essay topics:

The line graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year.

The line map demonstrates the income of various cafes in New York for the previous year.

we can easily notice that in summer, The tea room had the highest rate followed by internet express, Wi-fi cafe and cafe cool. The change in trends was drastic for all the cafe. Also, we can see that in winter, The tea room suffered a major fall, where-as the rest three cafe made a considerable increment.

The income for The tea room was observed to be 160 thousand dollars in January and was down to 50 thousand dollars in December. While the income of the internet express was observed to be gradually decreasing for the first half-year and the same increased steadily for the next half-year.

In addition to that, the income of the Wi-fi cafe rose i.e. from 50k dollars in January to nearly 100k dollars in the month of July. In the rainy season, the income was seen to be falling and again in winter, the income increased to 190k dollars. The pattern that cafe cool followed was alternate increment and decrement and finally ended up with a considerable increase to a notable income of 120k dollars.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'cafe' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'cafes', 'caves'.
Suggestion: cafes; caves
...d a major fall, where-as the rest three cafe made a considerable increment. The in...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. from 50k dollars in January to nearly 100k dollars in the month of July. In th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42274994402 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4691686617 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.111111111 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20875108816 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102748196776 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993564993995 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167742610005 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122477561605 0.0819641961636 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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