The map below shows three proposed sites for a new hypermarket (A, B and C) in the city of Pellington.

Essay topics: The map below shows three proposed sites for a new hypermarket (A, B and C) in the city of Pellington.

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The map represents three possible sites (A, B and C) in the city of Pellington for a new hypermarket.
A is located in North-West of Pellington, whereas site B and C are sited in a countryside. Site B is in North-East corner of the city of Pellington while, site C is located in the South centre of the city.
Looking in details, site A has a railway that passes through the surrounding areas (residential and industrial) and on the east of A has traffic zones. If it is built here, it will be next to residential and industrial areas, thus providing easy access by use of railway for those living on the estate.
Meanwhile, site B is located in countryside of Pellington but it has the motorway that connects between industrial areas and countryside. If the hypermarket is built here, it can expect to draw people from industrial complexes by use of motorways.
In contrast, site C can be accessed by people from industrial and residential since it is surrounded by all. Also, airport is nearby and the railway and motorway make easy to access to it. Therefore, by building a hypermarket in here would draw the most people.

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'whereas', 'while', 'in contrast']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268181818182 0.268076937826 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.159090909091 0.116061578633 137% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0681818181818 0.0759168565197 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0363636363636 0.0366838410393 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0272727272727 0.0131127313244 208% => OK
Prepositions: 0.163636363636 0.155750635184 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0590909090909 0.0379272487307 156% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99682078625 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0181818181818 0.0210936926555 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0863636363636 0.0948980150116 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0181818181818 0.00437022459523 416% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00909090909091 0.00967000014798 94% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1122.0 1161.00487805 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.9 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63819095477 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316582914573 0.337110787985 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251256281407 0.247514529752 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180904522613 0.171178102325 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145728643216 0.112407865282 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99682078625 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482412060302 0.546246751206 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.0269893289 49.3433353143 83% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.769943733 42.9750493124 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 135.714022679 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.689975730869 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 45.0256281407 47.7609492067 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.20408163265 2.94281807926 75% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428600116282 0.418131533498 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.189769833491 0.181151798455 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108018782352 0.0850326197045 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.717111614903 0.706616315825 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146346200251 0.157042692854 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228683982884 0.228904883108 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189883891822 0.108899403657 174% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.358544175024 0.367819155151 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0643122723192 0.0812612215331 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335718727062 0.316326947829 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.215784090443 0.0921553760075 234% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.08536585366 196% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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