The supplied two pie charts represent how much money was received for children s charity and its outlay in USA during one year.
Overall, donated food shared the biggest proportion other revenue sources as the program services accounted for a significant amount of expenditure.
In detail, the total received amount was a slight higher than the amount of expenditure $53/561,580 and $53,224,896 respectively. With regards to revenue sources, donated food comprised of half of the revenue of charity of total charity by 86.6%, while category community contribution was the second place with 10.4 %. By following it, the program revenue shared 2.2 %, while both Investment income and government grants together accounted for 0.4 % as the same equal other kinds of income According to outlay, the program service was the largest proportion of expenditure Ve Ya income by 95.8%, whereas, the expenditure of fundraising category was 2.6 %, and management and general, in contrast, shared the lowest expenditure by 1.6%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46496815287 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83885587131 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611464968153 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => OK
Sentence length SD: 113.4576573 43.030603864 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.6 112.824112599 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 43.0 1.69756097561 2533% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17588604789 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117148338856 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139251713687 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16162811295 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159302859932 0.0819641961636 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.2329268293 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.