The pie charts below show 5 reasons why people chose to leave stayed in the UK

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show 5 reasons why people chose to leave/stayed in the UK.

Two pie charts reveal a variety of reasons which affect the habitants in making the decisions to reside in Uk or migrate to other countries.

Overall, the standard of life is the main reason people leave in UK while relationships is the most important matter residents care to live in this nation.

As can be seen from the first graph, there are 5 reasons people chose to emigrate in the UK. The highest percentage of the reasons is quality of life which account for 41%. Living with family and friends is the second place among the reasons with 23%, following that is employment with 19%. The other reasons are financial problems and the weather condition have the nearly equal proportion with 9% and 8% respectively.

Turning on the second pie chart, there are some reasons people chose to stay in UK which are as the same as ones residents decide to leave it. Relationships is the primary reason that influence on residing in the UK with 43%. This figure doubles the percentage of reason which is social life while language, employment and financial reasons make up the small proportions with 11%, 10% and 15$ appropriately.

Votes
Average: 6.3 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... to stay in UK which are as the same as ones residents decide to leave it. Relations...
^^^^
Line 7, column 390, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$15'.
Suggestion: $15
...the small proportions with 11%, 10% and 15$ appropriately.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83076923077 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61025137272 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7753294754 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320219889148 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146369859588 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116344913506 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202690809908 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632813784337 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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