Pie chart
Topic: Time spent on leisure activities by men and women between the age of 21 and 40 , in the US.
The pie charts illustrate the amount of time per week men and women. between the age of 21 and 40, spent on leisure activities in the us .It can be seen that men spend approximately 33,3 hours a week on leisure time whereas 33,1 hours per week which women spent on leisure time.
For men, most of their leisure time seems to be spend on TV and Internet. This activity accounts for nearly a half of the total at 16,2 hours. Men had the second most hours on other leisure at home, just 9,2 hours. The amount of time per week which people spent on socialising (4,1) followed by on eating out, cinema, pubs (3,3). The least time is spent on sports and walking (1,1 hours by men ).
In contrast, for women, the amount of time a week spent on other leisure at home is 10,6 hours followed by on TV and Internet (9,2). Women had third most hours spent on socialising (6,1 hours).It is followed by eating out, cinema, pubs (5,3 hours) and the amount of time per week spent on sports , walking (1,9 hours ).
In conclusion, it seems that while the total time spent weekly on leisure by the males and females does not differ greatly, the spread of this time is more balanced for men than women, in the US.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, third, whereas, while, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31390134529 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11170914896 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461883408072 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1340185367 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403164746061 0.215688989381 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178667110212 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116308566035 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281950429056 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133960877224 0.0819641961636 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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