The plans below show the layout of a university s sport center now and how it will look after redevelopment

Essay topics:

The plans below show the layout of a university's sport center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The maps describe the changes in layout to the sport center of a university with the introduction of redevelopment.
Looking at the pictures it can be seen that the sport center will undogo remarkable changes after reconstructed. The most noticeable changes that the area will witness are the expansion of the sport center and the appearance of many service area.
As can be seen from the pictures, whereas two outdoor courts outside the main building will be demolished to make way for the expansion, the center is going to be fully indoor one. To the West of the map, a new leisure pool will be set up with a changing room in the way to the entrance. According to the plans, the reception zone will be widen with a sport shop in the left and a new cafe in the right. Neibouringly, the 25m pool linking with a changing room and the seating will remain unchanged after redevelopment.
On the other side of the center, zone for gym are going to be widen to the East, next to two newly-erected dance studios. There will be a sport hall in the university' sport center next door the seating area while another changing room are planned in the opposite.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5652173913 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66438150355 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487922705314 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.5921796543 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246590318835 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122428099938 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792866788707 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182560917596 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479850214941 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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