Pollution levels in London, micrograms per cubic metre between 1600 and 2000.

The graph shows the pollution levels in london due to smoke and sulpher dioxid between 1600 and 2000 mesured by cubic metre.

Overall it can be seen that there is dominance of sulpher dioxid in pollution than smoke.

From above 1550 till around 1700 the sulpher dioxid reach above 750 mcg in comperison of the smoke which reached below 250mcg, while the highst pollution level due to smoke was between 1800th till 1900 which reached just below 500mcg , but at the same time there was increase in sulpher dioxid level which reached below 1000.
Afler 1900 the level of sulpher dioxid and smoke was decreasing till they reach zero at the 2000..
In conclusion air pollution due to smoke and sulpher dioxid reached there peak at the18th and became flucatated in 19th till disapear in the 20th

Votes
Average: 2.5 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...ill 1900 which reached just below 500mcg , but at the same time there was increase...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...reasing till they reach zero at the 2000.. In conclusion air pollution due to smo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 660.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81751824818 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05577551801 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 180.0 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.6704101756 43.030603864 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.0 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179083556008 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134392774487 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137904003104 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134392774487 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137904003104 0.0819641961636 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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