rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are plenty of debates for fees increment and unemployment are revolving around the world. Some individuals are of the opinion that higher secondary schools should involve only practical degree courses rather arts subjects in university curricula. However, I firmly disagree with this view.
On the first side, it is undeniable fact that, today, unemployment and education fees are burgeoning. To begin with, pupils would complete their education in less time as all subjects should not be taught during actual curriculum. Thus, university goers focus on only professional study because of th...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...versity goers focus on only professional study because of they have to profound s...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...goers focus on only professional study because of they have to profound study in field subject...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...erested in degree courses and he or she want arts subjects such as philosophy and hi...
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Suggestion:
...ch has been paid in all semesters, could not cover by salary. To conclude, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, so, thus, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 965.302439024 154% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45421245421 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87675713164 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 106.607317073 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 283.868780488 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1744638709 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5882352941 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210978901602 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615067154216 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685410063539 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121113436367 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569354020077 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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