With the dawn of the 21st century, the living expenses and lifestyle have increased tremendously where more people are living the luxurious lifestyle while some struggle to pay for daily expenses. Everyone has different problems such as unsatisfactory job, shortage of money and others. People are unsatisfied in their jobs because they expect more such as higher salary while wanting to work comfortably, following the pattern of 9 am-5 pm working hours. As living expenses have risen, some people that live in poverty do not have sufficient money to get through the day. Is it better for people to accept these bad situations or should they work harder to improve their situation? Let's find out!
Personally, I think it is better for people to try and improve their situation because I strongly believe that you get what you work hard for. If people stop complaining about everything and try to think of different solutions to solve their situation or problem, they will less likely to meet a difficult situation. Besides that, if they face the problem of having an unsatisfactory job, they could try to apply for a different job position in another company. Instead of complaining and not try their best in their workplace which could lead to a reduction in their salaries, they will not face the situation of lack of money.
On the other hand, accepting a bad situation might not be as bad as it seems to be. Some people are lazy and they would rather just accept the situation and move on from there. In some ways, they are able to save time and their energy as they could just maintain in the same position rather than spending time to apply for a different job or find alternative ways to get more money.
In conclusion, I think people should try to improve their situations instead of sitting back and relax. The outcome is that people that will improve will be able to have a better lifestyle and will not face any other different problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...work harder to improve their situation? Lets find out! Personally, I think it is ...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...lly, I think it is better for people to try and improve their situation because I stron...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 965.302439024 168% => OK
No of words: 339.0 196.424390244 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77876106195 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54903103018 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 106.607317073 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474926253687 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 283.868780488 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1050390824 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.714285714 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23464796038 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958717653488 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481814203532 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145009979108 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324109798811 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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