Spending of Uk and France
The chart compares the money which was spent on consumer goods by two countries (France and UK) in 2010. It can be seen that, with the exception of cameras, there are no big differences in the outlays of these countries.
According to the chart, cars are by far the most popular item among consumers, with the 450000 pounds in the UK, and 400000 pounds in France. Interestingly, the British paid out 100000 more pounds on books than the French. The more striking scenario can be seen on the disbursements on cameras, while France expended only 150000, the United Kingdom boasts its expenditure of over 350000 £.
On the other hand, France outmatched its counterpart in the outlays on computers and perfume. Regarding money which was spent on computers, the French were a bit more liberal, with nearly 400000 £, while this figure for the UK, could not exceed 350000. Likewise, the expenditure of these countries on perfume was about 200000 and just under 150000£ accordingly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ce and UK in 2010. It can be seen that, with the exception of cameras, there are no big differences i...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£350000'.
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... Kingdom boasts its expenditure of over 350000 £. On the other hand, France outmatc...
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...sts its expenditure of over 350000 £. On the other hand, France outmatched its...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£400000'.
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...ch were a bit more liberal, with nearly 400000 £, while this figure for the UK, could no...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£150000'.
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...perfume was about 200000 and just under 150000£ accordingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, likewise, regarding, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61052471777 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630303030303 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5074143225 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160434366236 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666691451124 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658656486719 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116104046046 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192113346804 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.