The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

Essay topics:

The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade – labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The table represents the sales of coffee and bananas in five European countries, namely; the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden from 1999 to 2004. The units are measured in millions of Euros.
Overall, the UK sold the most of coffees within European countries while Switzerland sold most bananas. It is apparent that, Sweden sold the least bananas and coffees among other European countries.
In terms of coffee sales, the UK sold the most of 1.5 million euros in 1999 which figure rose drastically to reach at 20 million euros by 2004, followed by Switzerland’s coffee sales which doubled its sales from 3 million euros in 1999. In contrast, 0.8 million euros of coffee were sold in Sweden in 1999 and this sale grew to 1 million euro in 2004.
Meanwhile, the Switzerland sold the highest number of bananas of 15 million euros in 1999 and by 2004, this sale recorded at 47 million euros. The UK also experienced a remarkable grows in its banana sale from 1 million euro to 5.5 million euros in the same periods, whereas Sweden sold the least bananas of 1.8 million euros in 1999 but this dropped to 1 million euros in 2004. Denmark had the same declining trend from 2 million euros to 0.9 million euros in the projected period.

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Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the coffees') or simply say ''most coffees''.
Suggestion: most of the coffees; most coffees
...ns of Euros. Overall, the UK sold the most of coffees within European countries while Switzer...
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Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
... million euros. The UK also experienced a remarkable grows in its banana sale from 1 million...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'in contrast']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263374485597 0.268076937826 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.0905349794239 0.116061578633 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0658436213992 0.0759168565197 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0205761316872 0.0366838410393 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0123456790123 0.0131127313244 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152263374486 0.155750635184 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0164609053498 0.0379272487307 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.54892453562 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0246913580247 0.0210936926555 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.082304526749 0.0948980150116 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0082304526749 0.00967000014798 85% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1248.0 1161.00487805 107% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.9 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75115207373 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73763899035 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31797235023 0.337110787985 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248847926267 0.247514529752 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.124423963134 0.171178102325 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0691244239631 0.112407865282 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54892453562 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460829493088 0.546246751206 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.9889915702 49.3433353143 81% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.1111111111 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4180172222 42.9750493124 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.666666667 135.714022679 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 48.9959037378 47.7609492067 103% => OK
Elegance: 3.5 2.94281807926 119% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404192241827 0.418131533498 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.273788759428 0.181151798455 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.161535581451 0.0850326197045 190% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.785783134217 0.706616315825 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.108969317833 0.157042692854 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242502191749 0.228904883108 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119699187552 0.108899403657 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.376823191298 0.367819155151 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.220043358155 0.0812612215331 271% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323989360349 0.316326947829 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120604748174 0.0921553760075 131% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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