the table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

Essay topics:

the table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

The table compares the proportion of expenditure that people in five different countries spended on various categories in 2002.
Overall, food, drinks and tobacco had a highest percentage of expenditure in all five nations while spending on leisure and education was smallest.
Ireland and Turkey accounted a higher proportion in terms of food, drinks, tobacco among five countries, at 28.91% and 32.14%, respectively. In Italy, Spain and Sweden, these figures were significant less at 16.36%, 18.80% and 15.77%, respectively. With regards to clothing and footwear, there was not a considerable difference in Ireland, Spain, Sweden and Turkey, at 6.43%, 6.51%, 5.40% and 6.63%, respectively. But this figure was higher slightly in Italy at 9.00%.
On the other hand, spending on leisure and education contributed to a small proportion into total budget spent on given categories, at 2.21% in Ireland, 3.20% in Italy, 1.98% in Spain, 3.22% in Swenden and 4.35% in Turkey

Votes
Average: 7 (7 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... Overall, food, drinks and tobacco had a highest percentage of expenditure in al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40131578947 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8689566738 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4836169384 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147473529119 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797249144494 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118446377112 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125618698469 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137701214558 0.0819641961636 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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