The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table provides some details about date opened, kilometres of route and how many passengers per year use underground railway system in six metropolises.

It is clearly that London was the first city who had an underground railway system opened in 1863. Moreover, it is the longest system in the world because the route of railway system has 394 km, but annually 775 millions of passengers use this kind of transport. After 39 years, Paris released their railway system which has 199 km transporting yearly 1191 million passengers, it seen is more used than London`s railway system. In terms of numbers of travellers, Tokyo`s metro system is smaller than London`s one, but in every year are transported 1927 million individuals almost double than Paris system.

In contrast, the smallest underground railway system is from Kyoto having only 11 km used by 45 million of people annually. Not so far is the Los Angeles`s system with a length of 28 km, opened in 1981, after 4 years of the release of Washington`s railway system which serves 144 millions of passengers.

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Average: 9.7 (6 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '775 million'.
Suggestion: 775 million
...railway system has 394 km, but annually 775 millions of passengers use this kind of transport. ...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '144 million'.
Suggestion: 144 million
...gton's railway system which serves 144 millions of passengers.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich serves 144 millions of passengers.
^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'moreover', 'so', 'in contrast', 'kind of']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.314814814815 0.268076937826 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.106481481481 0.116061578633 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0416666666667 0.0759168565197 55% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.0366838410393 151% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0185185185185 0.0131127313244 141% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143518518519 0.155750635184 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0277777777778 0.0379272487307 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99476776024 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0601851851852 0.0948980150116 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185185185185 0.00967000014798 192% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1103.0 1161.00487805 95% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.9 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16201117318 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.379888268156 0.337110787985 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268156424581 0.247514529752 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156424581006 0.171178102325 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122905027933 0.112407865282 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99476776024 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631284916201 0.546246751206 116% => OK
Word variations: 61.0549896434 49.3433353143 124% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 25.5714285714 23.0094962315 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9674579431 42.9750493124 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.571428571 135.714022679 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 23.0094962315 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.689975730869 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 52.3870710295 47.7609492067 110% => OK
Elegance: 2.69230769231 2.94281807926 91% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207148383087 0.418131533498 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.160202960059 0.181151798455 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0381963378791 0.0850326197045 45% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.695089437965 0.706616315825 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157084888026 0.157042692854 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13233282594 0.228904883108 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753668599881 0.108899403657 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.396419371808 0.367819155151 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.128889523832 0.0812612215331 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184595754221 0.316326947829 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425125503802 0.0921553760075 46% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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