The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Essay topics:

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table chart demonstrates the proportion of three major groups of items which are purchased by customers in five countries, namely, Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.

It is clear that food, drinks and tobacco are some items which are the most consumed while leisure and education are the least.

Irish and Turkish spent more money on food/drinks/tobacco, which is account for 28.91% and 32.14% respectively, than three other countries. Percentages of Italy, Spain and Sweden consumer expenditure on food/drinks/tobacco are roundly 17%.

In comparison, percentages of food/drinks/ tobacco spending higher than percentages of clothing, footwear and leisure, education spending combined. Money spending on leisure/education accounted for around 3%, meanwhile, it is nearly 7% of clothing and footwear. Also, Italy had highest percentages of national consumer expenditure for clothing/footwear, at 9%. For leisure and education, Spain had the lowest figure, at only 1.98%.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
...% of clothing and footwear. Also, Italy had highest percentages of national consumer expend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88965517241 4.92477711251 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50348900329 2.65546596893 132% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634482758621 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9258162389 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1115820571 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513626945505 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419686370576 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763179625671 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411937670954 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 11.4140731707 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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