The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

A glance at the table provided reveals some data concerning the figures for consumer spending on diverse items through five representative countries namely, Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.

It is readily apparent that, Ireland spent 28.91% on food/drink/tobacco with being almost 10% higher than Spain while there was a slight divergence between Italy and Sweden indicating 16.36% and 15.77% in this trend, respectively. Likewise, Ireland, Spain and Turkey all demonstrated above 6.40% and Sweden indicated the lowest percentage among them (5.40%).

Regarding the category Leisure/Education, it is evident that every country showed lower rates to compare with the other categories. Turkey and Sweden took the priority showing 4.35% and 3.22% whereas Spain revealed the lowest percentage (1.98%).

Overall, it can easily be observed that Turkey spent mainly on food, drinks and tobacco, and also leisure and education as well with being in the precedence over the rest whilst Italy showed the highest percentage in clothing and footwear only, among the countries.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, regarding, so, well, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62195121951 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82908430857 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701219512195 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3535679191 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.666666667 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0663941423835 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343221877198 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575199940052 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493580659461 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647746801139 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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