The table below gives information on internet use in six categories by age group.
Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.
Comparing activities, we can see that e-mail is the most popular activity with users of
all ages. At least 90% of people use the internet for e-mails.
Whilst 80% of teenagers play online games, this figure drops to 55% of people in
their twenties and 36% of people in their thirties. Online gaming reaches a low of
20% with people in their fifties and then increases in popularity with older people.
Music and video downloads display a similar trend to internet games, but they
are less popular in general and decline markedly with people over age 40. Only 6%
of people over age 70 download music and videos.
Online travel reservations are made by over half of all people except for teenagers
who do not book any travel over the internet. Travel reservations peak in the thirties
age group, when almost three-quarters of people make reservations in this way.
Online purchases are made by approximately two-thirds of people, except for
those at both ends of the age scale, where internet shopping is less popular.
Searching for people online is done by between one-quarter and one-third of
people depending on age, except for teenagers who make only three searches out
of every 100.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, third, at least, except for, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56745101706 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7459931648 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 3.83414634146 391% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0839338055305 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411492543145 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333312677888 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.034312980649 0.15604864568 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392281264626 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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