The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table and the chart show the total of the Ashdown Museum’s guests and their satisfaction throughout the year before and after it was renovated. Overall, the total of visitor increased slightly, and dissatisfied of people become fewer based the surveys.
After the improvement work, the museum got 92,000 visitant over the first year which grew from 74,000 in the last year before the restoration. Additionally, there was a small rise on visitor’s comfort which stood at 40% from 35%. Likewise, the rate of people who felt very satisfied went up significantly by 20% which reached 35% of the total.
On the other hand, before the development customer’s disappointment was initially 40% then, it went down massively to just 15%. Similarly, the percentage of very displeased also dropped, which leveled out 5% from 10%. Finally, respondents with no replay remained at 5% before and after the repair of the museum.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, likewise, similarly, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0251978815 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8473193176 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.25 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236793862965 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959368204515 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967062208253 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162993510175 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765586591709 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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