The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

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The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The given table provides information on the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after renovation. Moreover, the two pie charts depicts data on the level of satisfaction the visitors had the year before and the year after the museum was refurbished.

Overall, it can be observed that the museum was more successful in terms of the number of visitors the year after refurbishment, taking into account that the figure rose from 74,000 visitors to 92,000 visitors.

According to the surveys conducted the year before refurbishment, 40% of the people who visited the museum were dissatisfi...

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Average: 9.5 (7 votes)

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Discourse Markers used:
['look', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265384615385 0.268076937826 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.142307692308 0.116061578633 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0653846153846 0.0759168565197 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0576923076923 0.0366838410393 157% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00769230769231 0.0131127313244 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.161538461538 0.155750635184 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0423076923077 0.0379272487307 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78169677524 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0192307692308 0.0210936926555 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00384615384615 0.00175180941692 220% => OK
Determiners: 0.123076923077 0.0948980150116 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00384615384615 0.00437022459523 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0153846153846 0.00967000014798 159% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1421.0 1161.00487805 122% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.9 119% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07264957265 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73763899035 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.384615384615 0.337110787985 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252136752137 0.247514529752 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192307692308 0.171178102325 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119658119658 0.112407865282 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78169677524 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495726495726 0.546246751206 91% => OK
Word variations: 45.0828341188 49.3433353143 91% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0094962315 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4693651981 42.9750493124 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.888888889 135.714022679 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.0094962315 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.689975730869 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 51.2136752137 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.25925925926 2.94281807926 77% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.666069196376 0.418131533498 159% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.23903962227 0.181151798455 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0621566699464 0.0850326197045 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.749147480365 0.706616315825 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15855573715 0.157042692854 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.401316200455 0.228904883108 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138542141904 0.108899403657 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.503540835735 0.367819155151 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0698718531032 0.0812612215331 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.530377805842 0.316326947829 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10918303398 0.0921553760075 118% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70731707317 216% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 3.16585365854 253% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 93.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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