The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998

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The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998

The table depicts the percentage of income spent on 4 common items (food, electronic equipment, music and videos) in the UK in 1998 among adults (men and women) as well as children (boys and girls).

In overall, adults spent the most in food, especially women and the least in videos. Children spent a significantly high percentage of their income on music and the least in food. Children spent more than the adults.

Zooming into detail, adults spent 25% of their income on food, which is comparatively higher when compared to children (only 10% of income spent). Women, especially, contri...

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Average: 8.2 (10 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... 18% and 17% respectively on videos. It is clearly seen that children allocat...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'well', 'while', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.309523809524 0.268076937826 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.0992063492063 0.116061578633 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0753968253968 0.0759168565197 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0595238095238 0.0366838410393 162% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0238095238095 0.0131127313244 182% => OK
Prepositions: 0.154761904762 0.155750635184 99% => OK
Participles: 0.031746031746 0.0379272487307 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54856380519 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0119047619048 0.0210936926555 56% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0634920634921 0.0948980150116 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119047619048 0.00967000014798 123% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1261.0 1161.00487805 109% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.9 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83796296296 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73763899035 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.296296296296 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.199074074074 0.247514529752 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157407407407 0.171178102325 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106481481481 0.112407865282 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54856380519 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467592592593 0.546246751206 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.6384288431 49.3433353143 82% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0094962315 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3350105575 42.9750493124 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.083333333 135.714022679 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.0094962315 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.689975730869 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 37.9074074074 47.7609492067 79% => OK
Elegance: 2.71739130435 2.94281807926 92% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424646423925 0.418131533498 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.215121246508 0.181151798455 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.124279157948 0.0850326197045 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.613724831443 0.706616315825 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160934478448 0.157042692854 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199591946895 0.228904883108 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129473350409 0.108899403657 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.432051990687 0.367819155151 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109011005615 0.0812612215331 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324246641961 0.316326947829 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137646141493 0.0921553760075 149% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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