The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

Essay topics:

The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

The table illustrates the sales produced by a coffee shop inside an office building in a regular weekday. It is clearly seen that the most peak time of the coffee shop is the early morning, which is 7:30 to 10: 30 am.

It is seen that the coffee shop obtains their highest sales during 7:30 am to 10: 30 am with a 700 total sales volume followed by the next time shift, which is 10: 30 to 2: 30 pm, with a total of 530 sales. During the 5:30 pm to 8:30 pm time shift, the coffee shop's sales stands a total of 465. On the contrary, the lowest products sell could be observed during the afternoon period, which is 2: 30pm to 5: 30 pm. However, evening time shift (5: 30 pm to 8: 30 pm) makes a better sale than the afternoon sales with 465 sales in total.

Overall, coffee is the most consumed item in the coffee shop with about 8 hundred sales per day followed by pastries and sandwich sales with 600 and 400 respectively. The tea, on the other hand, is the least bought product, 270 cups in a day, by the consumers in a typical weekday.

In summary, 7: 30 am to 10: 30 am is the most peak time of the coffee shop. Respectively, coffee is the most sought product in the shop and tea is the least bought product the consumers.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in summary, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15481171548 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22799320293 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464435146444 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1469224139 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240660848296 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130703672808 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129907175493 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189091985128 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102045287206 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.43 61.2550243902 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.09 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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