The table below shows the world s ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The table below shows the world’s ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the list of countries with highest petrol expenses.

The main contrasting feature is the outstandingly low values of average monthly disposable income of Turkey and Eritrea. It corresponds to their high percentage of monthly income spent on petrol, with 34 and 61 percent respectively. However, average monthly petrol expenditure of Eritrea is 275 dollars, same as Sweedish values but Turkey petrol expenses reach a second highest value in the list with 316 dollars a months, which is just below Norway woth 320 dollars a month.

On the other hand, countries like Sweeden, Norway or Denmark have remarkably low percentage of monthly income spent on petrol, that results in high values of monthly disposable income, However, average monthly petrol expenditure does not follow this trend.

To conclude, percentage of monthly income spent on petrol corelates with average monthly disposable income in all countries but now with average petrol expenditure.

Votes
Average: 7.4 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...table illustrates the list of countries with highest petrol expenses. The main contrastin...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a month' or simply 'months'?
Suggestion: a month; months
...hest value in the list with 316 dollars a months, which is just below Norway woth 320 do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, second, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5298013245 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76107321235 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7249338624 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.166666667 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129393683994 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858562739084 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043403700066 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1078988749 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369544384658 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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