The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables illustrate sales value of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas, a certain category of product that was produce in developing countries and sold in justice price, in five countries in Europe during 1999 and 2004. Units are measured in million euros.

Overall, bananas market was accounted for more value than coffee market, nevertheless, from 1999 to 2004, the sales of both products rose drastically in UK, Switzerland, and Belgium. Conversely, demand of bananas decrease significantly in Sweden and Denmark.

With regards to the sales of the coffee in UK, it jumped from 1.5 million euros in 1999 to 20 million euros in 2004, the largest growth among those five countries. Likewise, in Switzerland, bananas market tripled its value in 1999, which was worth only 15 million euros, and landed at 47 million euros in 2004.

In contrast, in Sweden, money earned from bananas fell from 1.8 million euros to one million euros during that period. Moreover, there was similar decrease in Denmark, where the sales of bananas dropped by half just like what happened in Sweden.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
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Discourse Markers used:
['conversely', 'if', 'likewise', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'in contrast']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266009852217 0.268076937826 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.0935960591133 0.116061578633 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0443349753695 0.0759168565197 58% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0344827586207 0.0366838410393 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00985221674877 0.0131127313244 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.182266009852 0.155750635184 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0344827586207 0.0379272487307 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70152978356 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0197044334975 0.0210936926555 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0492610837438 0.0948980150116 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0197044334975 0.00967000014798 204% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1087.0 1161.00487805 94% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.9 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17613636364 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397727272727 0.337110787985 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295454545455 0.247514529752 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153409090909 0.171178102325 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0909090909091 0.112407865282 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70152978356 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.546246751206 107% => OK
Word variations: 52.4422632477 49.3433353143 106% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4378875409 42.9750493124 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.875 135.714022679 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.689975730869 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 51.5454545455 47.7609492067 108% => OK
Elegance: 3.5 2.94281807926 119% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412883653855 0.418131533498 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123861451418 0.181151798455 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0922341642111 0.0850326197045 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.704320864827 0.706616315825 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167323918908 0.157042692854 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214456327709 0.228904883108 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12649902705 0.108899403657 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.37969839204 0.367819155151 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0492506461345 0.0812612215331 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306953779697 0.316326947829 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102355551963 0.0921553760075 111% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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