Task 1 The tasks below show the top 10 countries in terms of tourist destination revenue and spending Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

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Task 1: The tasks below show the top 10 countries in terms of tourist destination, revenue and spending. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The three charts provided show the reports on the top 10 countries in terms of tourist destinations, revenue and spending and it is interesting to note that there are correlations among them.
Overall, the top countries with the highest spending on tourism had earned the greatest revenue and the largest number of tourists, except for Japan and Netherland.
Looking closely at the provided data, the correlation between top destinations and top earners is not so correct. While the United States had 47.1 millions of visitors, stood at the fourth place, the revenue was the highest, namely 74.2 billion, as three times larger than France which had the largest number of tourists (70 millions). The relation between Spain and Italy is similar to the case between USA and France.
It is obviously that the higher money spent on tourism, the greater the revenue gained. This trend is correct for most of the top countries except for Japan and Netherland, which spending among the top 10 regions, however did not appear on the top destinations as well as top earners. While Poland and Mexico got 18.8 and 19.3 millions of tourists, they did not appear among the top earners, and though earning 8.6 billion of dollars, Australia was not recorded as the top popular destinations for tourists.

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Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '1 million'.
Suggestion: 1 million
...correct. While the United States had 47.1 millions of visitors, stood at the fourth place, th...
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Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
...While Poland and Mexico got 18.8 and 19.3 millions of tourists, they did not appear among the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, well, while, as to, except for, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00465116279 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56340261972 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548837209302 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6911014508 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189236846567 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863514854092 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072243925674 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133758042205 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662851902923 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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