To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
As the statement is presented the most important characteristics of the society can be known by studying its major cities but that is not the correct assumption because in india there are 70 percent of rural areas and 20 percent of urban areas so we cannot directly deduce that the most important characteristics of the society can be decided by its major cities.
firstly to understand the most important characteristics of our society it is requisite to know about the rural areas and our traditions and our cultures because India is a country where we have all types of religions and their traditions. each religion have disparate traditions,India is a mixture of different traditions and languages,eventhough there are many religions in our country we stay united.
secondly we should know about different traditions of each village some villages has a unique traditions.as we are seeing now a days some villages pray to their village god so they hope that their god will do good for them.but in other countries it's not like that for illustration take arab countries they only pray alla and in british countries they pray to jesus.so in major cities we can find only some traditions and languages but in villages we can know every thing about the society.
thirdly major cities are cosmopolitan cities in which different tradition people live together so traditions get diluted but in the villages globalization is there so the traditions remain preserved.to understand about our society first we should know about the village traditions and history.
finally study of only major cities are not at all enough to understand most important characteristics of the society we should also know about villages traditions and cultures and history of society and financial status is also important to understand about the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 965.302439024 160% => OK
No of words: 298.0 196.424390244 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1711409396 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06577188554 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429530201342 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 283.868780488 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 22.4926829268 218% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.808343803 43.030603864 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 256.833333333 112.824112599 228% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.6666666667 22.9334400587 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 5.23603664747 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285177086805 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179721246294 0.103423049105 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150992328527 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20464911217 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146246550473 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.2329268293 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 61.2550243902 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.3012195122 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.9970731707 196% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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