To what extent is the use of animals in scientific research acceptable?

Essay topics:

To what extent is the use of animals in scientific research acceptable?

In modern technological society, animals are a routine source of scientific experiments. In fact, scientist usually use animals without concerning ethics codes.
To begin with, some scientists assume that using animals for developing of medicines is effective. On the other hand, many individuals believe that application of animals in drug discovery and pharmaceutical production is not avoidable/evitable. They are regarded as perfect experimental models due to their similarity to human. The animals’ immunological responses to biopharmaceuticals are similar to human. So/ therefore/ hence, where there is a prohibition for human experiments, the first alternative is lab animals.
Although their application in scientific research is a controversial issue, I disagree for the following reasons; First of all, animals are alive creature we are not allowed to deprive their rights. Secondly, the alternative way to animal experimentation could not always be effective. Lab animals such as rabbits, mice, and rats have/present slight genetic differences with human genomic structure which may lead to bias in research results. Even though, scientist may do not focus on this bias. The bias may cause unavoidable mistakes in drug development. Second, injuring animals for scientific purposes is not approved by ethics comities. Moreover, sometimes drug reaction causes them to suffer and die slowly. According to animal lovers’ association, thousands of mice are scarified to discover new drugs.
In conclusion, I believe, we should pay attention to animals’ right regardless of their stain and type. Although in some cases, using animals in scientific research gives benefit in science development, sometimes, using animals is an unnecessary process. Governments should create restrict regulations about using animals in experiment, for protecting animals from infraction of animals’ right.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ce are scarified to discover new drugs. In conclusion, I believe, we should pay ...
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...from infraction of animals' right.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'such as', 'first of all', 'in some cases', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283536585366 0.268076937826 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.146341463415 0.116061578633 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115853658537 0.0759168565197 153% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0426829268293 0.0366838410393 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.030487804878 0.0131127313244 233% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115853658537 0.155750635184 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0396341463415 0.0379272487307 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.40666617034 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0365853658537 0.0210936926555 173% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0426829268293 0.0948980150116 45% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0182926829268 0.00437022459523 419% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00609756097561 0.00967000014798 63% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1919.0 1161.00487805 165% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.9 140% => OK
Chars per words: 6.95289855072 5.90752243213 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73763899035 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.485507246377 0.337110787985 144% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.402173913043 0.247514529752 162% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.304347826087 0.171178102325 178% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.224637681159 0.112407865282 200% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.40666617034 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 106.607317073 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.546246751206 115% => OK
Word variations: 71.2445015768 49.3433353143 144% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 8.93414634146 201% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 15.3333333333 23.0094962315 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9938672764 42.9750493124 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.611111111 135.714022679 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 23.0094962315 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.689975730869 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 55.5507246377 47.7609492067 116% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 2.94281807926 68% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449240892749 0.418131533498 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0890916503889 0.181151798455 49% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0698669635198 0.0850326197045 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475108515854 0.706616315825 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144403864651 0.157042692854 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150249195042 0.228904883108 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675768307314 0.108899403657 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.273579722829 0.367819155151 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106810719503 0.0812612215331 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297950464741 0.316326947829 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022606006682 0.0921553760075 25% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.14146341463 701% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 0.956097560976 418% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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