You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparis

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The illustared show amount of people visiting Britian in different places in 1999.According to chart 5 different places are became attractive different than each other.

Initially,most popular venues are Theme Parks which is 38 percent and secondly place is Museums and Galleries which is 37 percent.This two attraction places almost have same number of visiters.In Theme Parks people be able to choice 5 different venue also.High number of visiting is Blackpool Pleasure Beach which is 47 percent.After pool Alton Towers,Pleasureland,Cheessington World of Adventures and Legoland come in the land.Apart from Blackpool rest of the places nearly same percent.

Secondly,after Theme Parks and Museums Historic Houses and Monuments are coming with 16 percent as a 3rd.When pass the Monuments Wildlife Parks and Zoos coming with in 9 percent.Which this mean Wildlife less renowned in this group.Relevant to this information most populer entertainment venues are Theme Parks and Museums and Galleries for 1999 Britain.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71052631579 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.74711338576 2.65546596893 141% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.4926829268 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.169949133 43.030603864 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 289.333333333 112.824112599 256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.6666666667 22.9334400587 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.23603664747 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0918108875006 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732084149948 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369004844308 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732084149948 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369004844308 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.8 13.2329268293 233% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 61.2550243902 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.3012195122 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 11.4140731707 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.9970731707 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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