You should spend about 20 minutes on this task Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth which can cause tooth decay High acid levels are measured by low pH values Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health You shoul

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)
Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.
You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the inverse relationship between the production of acid in the mouth and PH value after consumption of different types of sweeteners in relation with time.

Overall, every kind of sweets starts to exert their effect immediately after consumption and gradually wanes off after a time period. While cane sugar has its acid production and hence PH reduction rate slightly faster and for longer duration, for honey it is lest and thus their action correlate harmful effects on teeth.

Given close look it can be seen that PH level of saliva shows a decline from 7 moment after eaten of cane sugar and exhibits sharp descend and after 5 minutes reaches to PH 3.5 which is favorable for tooth decay. This figure stays in the same tooth decay zone for about half an hour before hitting the safer PH rate of 5.5 and finally climbed to the initial value. However, the sugar from honey taking its troll slowly and, acid generation and teeth damage is also less. PH level from honey decreases about 2 point at 5 minutes and stays at the unsafe zone for only 5 minutes and finally goes back to 7 again after 30 minutes.

In regards to fruit sugar, it stands middle among three categories, reaches to about 4 at 5 minutes and remains in the decay area for 15 minutes before coming back to normal PH at the end.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...es back to 7 again after 30 minutes. In regards to fruit sugar, it stands middle among thr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, however, if, look, so, thus, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65400843882 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31105023633 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.5413198872 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.875 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204759403008 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890652720493 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377806999383 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115265678629 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427537309382 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.