You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The illustrations show how chocolate is produced Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

Information pertaining the manufacturing of chocolate is evinced in the provided pictogram. Overall, the whole procedure consists of ten disparate steps, initiating with the collection of ripe red pods from Cacao trees and terminating with the production of liquid chocolate.

Prima facie, it is lucid that initially, ripened red pods are accumulated from the Cacao trees, which are cultivated in South America, Africa and Indonesia. Once the harvesting process is done, these pods are crushed to extract white cocoa beans from it, whereafter these beans are placed inside a large container for fermentation process.

Fermented beans, afterwards, are scattered under the sun for desiccation. When these beans’ colour change to light brown, these are stowed in large bags, which are subsequently delivered to factory either via a train or lorry. Inside the factory, primarily, these are roasted at the temperature of 350 degree Celsius; meanwhile, the shade of beans alters to dark brown. Thereupon, crushing of beans is commenced with the assistance of apposite machinery after which, the outer shell is segregated from the beans.

At the culminating stage, the separated inner part is squeezed in another adequate apparatus whereby the liquid chocolate is finally generated which concludes the whole process.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58208955224 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83564632438 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646766169154 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7487297169 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0311774933037 0.215688989381 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0166512306191 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269243798157 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0232941242869 0.15604864568 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184924834766 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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