You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram exhibits the process of dough-making for a pizza.

Overall, as can be seen from the pictorial, there are seven steps that should be executed, beginning with putting all the necessary ingredients into one stand mixer and ending with the dough divided into three equal portions.

Firstly, people mingle four cups of flour- which are tantamount to 500 grams, 325 grams of water, two tablespoons of salt, and ½ tablespoon of dry active yeast together. Then, the dough is whisked for two minutes on slow. Later, the compound is mixed moderately over an interval of five minutes. After that, the dough is to be mixed for the last two minutes.

The fifth step is to let the dough rise at a minimum of two hours so that it can double in size. Having finished the previous stage, people work the dough to remove all air bubbles. Finally, they cut it into three equivalent pieces, circa 275 grams each.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75471698113 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36940869071 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685534591195 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4496768851 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115906162253 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578022595752 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724667845066 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951246303751 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843774843751 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.