A Canadian friend recently sent you a present by post. You want to thank him/her.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Say how you felt when you received the present
- Describe what you like about it
- Explain how you will use the present
Hi Chris,
You can’t imagine how I was surprised, when I received a package from you. It was delivered last Sunday and I was so excited to see that it was from you. When I opened the package, I saw there beautiful silk scarf. I have to say that I was truly delighted for your present.
Thank you so much!!
You haven’t forget my taste in colors. The mix of blue and grey looks so wonderful and the silk material feels so soft and looks very beautiful on me. I can’t enough thank you for your attention. I am going to wear the scarf these weekends and will ask my friends to take a photo of mine and send that to you.
So thank you once again and Give my regards to your folk but lots of love to you and Peter.
I will write you soon and send that photo.
Best wishes,
Mehriban
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.175824175824 0.220444632235 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.164835164835 0.167888034529 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0659340659341 0.0606518309736 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0549450549451 0.0506257000042 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.159340659341 0.118615021944 134% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0604395604396 0.107062808482 56% => OK
Participles: 0.0164835164835 0.041066498444 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.25102813788 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0384615384615 0.0385302599488 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0494505494505 0.0714148451538 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.021978021978 0.0191574576366 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0164835164835 0.00930345855455 177% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 800.0 1141.60824742 70% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.134020619 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19480519481 5.53046319177 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78085437643 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.207792207792 0.284621296913 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.149350649351 0.211203875043 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.103896103896 0.133321485273 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0649350649351 0.0843313296314 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25102813788 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.622163163488 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.7089873411 62.8969750728 79% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 12.8333333333 16.4300151701 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2402417686 44.7399317507 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6666666667 90.9928171075 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.4300151701 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.613754768223 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 27.7683982684 37.5504026743 74% => OK
Elegance: 0.666666666667 1.13073093955 59% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366651772107 0.331212695627 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.068785989005 0.0927372745006 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.10601749063 0.0736520305886 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.579661155842 0.579516596996 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.251432038971 0.180689518051 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15621011613 0.122183219658 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827892807299 0.0765303033291 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.268527248056 0.211926503985 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0998760008167 0.0737400523855 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236512696995 0.203819188451 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368033256958 0.067151250289 55% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.45360824742 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 8.32989690722 72% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.