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Dear Sir/Madam
Please accept this letter and attached documents as my SINP application.
1. It is worth noting that according to our country conditions, business insurance is not mandatory. Therefore, I do not have pension statements as some employers do not offer insurance in their contracts and I signed my contracts without having certain types of insurance.
2. Also, I have attached my Tehran Construction Engineering Organization License garde3, the most important certification in our country to design and approve an electrical plan for residential buildings. According to this certification, I am qualified to design and control electrical plans.

This is to certify that Ms...…, daughter of…………, holder of the national card No. ….. issued in ………….., born on Feb. 01, 1988 has been receiving all her salaries and benefits in cash, according to the contracts, since she has been employed in Mehr Arazan Shahr civil engineering and consulting Co. (….. Co.).

If you need any further information, please contact me.
Telephone No. ………, mobile No…………, Email address:

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 83, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...f…………, holder of the national card No. ….. issued in ………….., born on Feb. 01, 1988...
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Line 6, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Issued
...……, holder of the national card No. ….. issued in ………….., born on Feb. 01, 1988 has be...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...the national card No. ….. issued in ………….., born on Feb. 01, 1988 has been receivi...
^^
Line 6, column 299, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...r civil engineering and consulting Co. ….. Co.. If you need any further informa...
^^
Line 6, column 304, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...il engineering and consulting Co. ….. Co.. If you need any further information,...
^^
Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e No. ………, mobile No…………, Email address:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69047619048 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2998960679 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720238095238 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5523601689 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 8.71597938144 177% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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