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Essay topics:

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1. It is worth noting that according to our country conditions, business insurance is not mandatory. Since some employers do not offer insurance in their contracts, I signed my contracts without having certain types of insurance. Therefore, I do not have any insurance or pension statements.
2. I send an Email to immigration@gov.sk.ca and asked for the number of pay stubs for each year. With reference to your Email, I have provided 5 paystubs per year, since 2012. And I also have attached your Email for your consideration.

3. Moreover, I have attached my Tehran Construction Engineering Organization License garde3, the most important certification in our country to design and approve an electrical plan for residential buildings. According to this certification, I am qualified to design and control electrical plans.
I would be most grateful if you could contact me for any further information.
Telephone No. 00958, mobile No. 0092,
Email address: akram_shangi02@yahoo.com
My SINP file number is 11 (OID Jun. 12, 2017).
My invoice number is 1.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours Sincerely,

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 5, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
... insurance or pension statements. 2. I send an Email to immigration@gov.sk.ca and asked for ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Telephone No. 00958, mobile No. 0092, Email address: akram_shangi02@yahoo.com ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, with reference to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45714285714 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61436589409 2.54303337028 142% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668571428571 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9731050115 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5833333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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