The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
»You should write not less than 150 words.
The table chart gives data about the purpose of UK residents on for which they traveled abroad from 1994 to 1998 while the bar chart demonstrates different destinations they chose to travel throughout the same four years.
Overall, as can be seen from the former chart, most of the figures experienced an upward trend, though some fluctuations interfered with some sectors in 1995. Meanwhile, in the latter one, Western Europe was conspicuously the most visited destination of UK citizens.
In the table chart, holidays contributed the most significantly in the chart, while other reasons played a less notable role. Traveling for holiday, visits to friends and relatives, other reasons, and the total underwent slight negative growth in 1995, while they increased steadily over the other years. An exception was going abroad for business, which rose rapidly without any disruption in the period of four years.
In the bar chart, traveling to Western Europe was the main trend: there were ups and downs in the process; however, this part was always the most popular place UK people aimed for. North America was less favored; yet, the number of travelers going there never decreased. Other areas were also people’s choice, their ratios were always higher than the former’s, and though there were some downticks, these remained negligible.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28372093023 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56436451908 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623255813953 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.8602497003 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.222222222 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237709884558 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922490152691 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803711123659 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150735989094 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979483471528 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 8.37731958763 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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