Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.Write a letter to your friend.* Thank them for the holiday and the photos*Why you didn't write earlier*Invite them to com

Essay topics:

Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
Write a letter to your friend.
* Thank them for the holiday and the photos
*Why you didn't write earlier
*Invite them to come and stay with you

Dear Propa,

Hope you are doing well. It's been a month since we last meet, Although it feels like a week ago.
I'm delighted to receive all photos you have sent for our memorable holiday together. I have enjoyed the most beautiful moment with this holidays. I knew that New Zealand countryside scenario is fascinating but, when I had seen with my own eyes it was just mesmerizing. I must say that your house view and the lakeside picturesque was on of the best.

I should write you earlier but after arriving in London my manager arranged a new project and for that reason, I didn't find enough time to catch up with you. But now my office project is going smoothly. So, I have a plan to invite you for our wedding anniversary. All of our old friends will come to attend our party. It'd be great if you come to visit us and meet our whole family here. You don't need to worry about your accommodation because you are going to stay with us. We have plenty of rooms. So, you don't need to shy about anything.

Take care and hope for your positive reply.

Yours Simi

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...et, Although it feels like a week ago. Im delighted to receive all photos you hav...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... enjoyed the most beautiful moment with this holidays. I knew that New Zealand count...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h my own eyes it was just mesmerizing. I must say that your house view and the l...
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Line 4, column 335, Rule ID: ON_OF_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...e view and the lakeside picturesque was on of the best. I should write you earl...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...side picturesque was on of the best. I should write you earlier but after arri...
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Suggestion: didn't
...ed a new project and for that reason, I didnt find enough time to catch up with you. ...
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Suggestion: don't
... us and meet our whole family here. You dont need to worry about your accommodation ...
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Suggestion: don't
...th us. We have plenty of rooms. So, you dont need to shy about anything. Take car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38693467337 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29430969429 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673366834171 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2765303531 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.2 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2666666667 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13333333333 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319032324209 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090381677225 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728846373611 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148381634277 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771012210825 0.0580467560999 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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