People in your area are having problems with their Internet connections Write a letter to this company which provides the connection In your letter 1 describe the problems 2 explain how they are affecting people 3 say what the company should do to help Yo

Essay topics:

People in your area are having problems with their Internet connections.
Write a letter to this company which provides the connection. In your letter
1. describe the problems
2. explain how they are affecting people
3. say what the company should do to help
You don't need to write any address.

Dear Sir or Madam,

We are encountering the problems of the Internet connection. I am writing this letter to express my complaints and request you to take measures to tackle the issue.

In this area, most residents are unable to connect to the Internet. Additionally, merely a small number of people can use the Internet, however, the network speed is extremely slow. As a consequence, they cannot conduct any online transactions or watch any videos.

People are affected severely by the connection issue. First of all, some people who work as a software developer find it difficult to work at home. Furthermore, the problem also deters students from searching and downloading any study materials through the Internet.

I would like you to send technical workers to this area and fix the connection issues this week. Besides, we also ask for the compensation for the occurrence of this situation.

I expected that the situation will be dealt with as soon as possible. If you require further information, you can contact me by email.

Yours sincerely,

David Villa

Votes
Average: 8 (8 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...t to the Internet. Additionally, merely a small number of people can use the Internet, however, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16477272727 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88904112571 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693181818182 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4755317664 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.9230769231 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167326090708 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556846106881 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337538090307 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752460384912 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315806218002 0.0580467560999 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

flaws:
No. of Words: 176 250 //the paragraphs are short

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 176 250
No. of Characters: 858 1200
No. of Different Words: 120 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.642 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.875 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.765 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 62 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.733 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.567 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.282 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.714 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.088 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5