Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to inform that I have lost my laptop during my vacation to Venice last week. I had went for a week’s vacation with my family during the 4th week of May. Please find my insurance policy number – ALL0102. Since I have travel insurance from Allstate Insurance Corp, I would like to claim the loss of my laptop.
First of all, let me give the detailed appearance of the laptop. The laptop’s make and model is Dell Pavillion – EM564. It is sleek in shape, apparently it weighs less than 2 kilograms. Color is Black and it has got the DELL logo in the centre of the laptop cover. Hope this describes the laptop’s look.
I kept the laptop safely in my room which was locked and went to recreation room to play games with my family. When I returned to our room no. 502, I found my laptop missing whereas I found the other items to be safe. Recreation centre was located nearby the room. I raised a complaint to the hotel management, but they could not find it. They searched in few key places such as room, Recreation centre and Café.
I would appreciate if you could arrange for the claim at the earliest. Please raise the claim request for Travel Insurance and let me know the procedure to follow. The Date of expiry of my travel policy is 20th of August.
Yours’ sincerely,
Chitra Gomathy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[6]
Message: Note: went is a past participle of "wend". Did you mean 'gone' (past participle of "go")?
Suggestion: gone
... my vacation to Venice last week. I had went for a week's vacation with my fami...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: sleek
... model is Dell Pavillion – EM564. It is sleek in shape, apparently it weighs less than 2 kilog...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, if, look, may, whereas, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58367346939 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50316251449 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583673469388 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8594404267 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.1052631579 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8947368421 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124761795223 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03371769931 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475599948815 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658818270031 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549546719127 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.