Write a letter to the branch manager complaining about one of the items purchased from one of the local store.
explain the situation
describe the problem
what you would like to happen
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to express my dissatisfaction toward the headphones purchased from one of your local store at 18th Manchester Street. I bought the item from the shop about a week back probabaly on 19th Jan 2017.
Firstly, Upon unboxing the item I got a bit surprised when I found that the headphones are not working as I cannot hear any sound coming out of them. Furthermore, I tested them even on my laptop but didn't find any success. I noticed it lately about two hours later that the headphones were not original and were actually from one of the local brands which is quite prevalent in our local market.
I would really appreciate if you can either replace the item or compensate me for the loss incurred on this item. I have also attached the invoice for your reference.
Should you need to contact me in case of any questions, please don't hesitate to either drop me an email or call me on my phone (750-630-8426).
Your's FaithFully
FaizalReza
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...re, I tested them even on my laptop but didnt find any success. I noticed it lately a...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... me for the loss incurred on this item. I have also attached the invoice for your...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...act me in case of any questions, please dont hesitate to either drop me an email or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64367816092 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62989912383 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7527066003 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7777777778 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221199424907 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074171757656 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808514401657 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127268645555 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962690064989 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.