Write a letter to restaurant manager. In your letter,
• Explain that you would like to apply for the job
• Give some details of any relevant experience that you have
• Specify the days and times that would suit you
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with reference to the job vacancy posted in ‘THE HINDU’ on 16th of October for FOOD PROCESSING Manager
I understand from the advertisement that the vacancy is of food processing manager. I am very excited to see this news as my present employment with Chenney’s restaurant is of the same kind of role. After completion of my diploma course in food processing I got this job offer through a campus selection. This August I completed my tenure of 10 years and I would be so glad to join your reputed restaurant if time and things turn out to positive.
As my role is on rotational shifts, I request you to schedule me an interview on weekdays. This will benefit me to speak with my superiors and seek permission. Also I would request you to clarify on the documents I should carry during the interview. I do understand the degree certification to be carried. However, I wish to know about the feedbacks or any testimonials about my service to be carried.
Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks for your time and consideration.
Yours Faithfully,
Ajay
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 193 250
No. of Characters: 883 1000
No. of Different Words: 120 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.727 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.575 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.813 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 62 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.867 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.965 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.314 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.69 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.123 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5