Write a letter to your manager about a new colleague, who makes things difficult at work for all of your team.
- Describe why he/she makes it difficult.
- Describe your feelings regarding the situation.
- What do you want your manager to do about it?
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to bring your attention to some issue with our member of team Mr. Adams.
As you remember, he was hired as an analyst last month. His duties was included collaborating with others and analyzing our new project, also reviewing our previous project which was released last year. Although, he is so professional in his field, his misbehavior causes lots of problems for us. Firstly, he is so jealous and always put us in trouble whenever he feels one of his colleagues does his job better than him. His misbehavior ruins friendly atmosphere among staff. Secondly, he does not have punctuality attitude. As result, in last month we have some problems to meet our deadline.
Although, I aware he is a valuable employee and his knowledge and experience are so useful for company, I believe if this situation continues, all work which have done until now would be useless. I think he would change his behavior if you speak with him personally and share our point of views. In addition, arrange an appointment with our counselor would be good idea as well.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'i think', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220183486239 0.220444632235 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.160550458716 0.167888034529 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0596330275229 0.0606518309736 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0688073394495 0.0506257000042 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.160550458716 0.118615021944 135% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119266055046 0.107062808482 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0366972477064 0.041066498444 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72309884089 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0137614678899 0.0385302599488 36% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0321100917431 0.0714148451538 45% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0137614678899 0.0191574576366 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00917431192661 0.00930345855455 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1132.0 1141.60824742 99% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.134020619 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83505154639 5.53046319177 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314432989691 0.284621296913 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242268041237 0.211203875043 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201030927835 0.133321485273 151% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128865979381 0.0843313296314 153% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72309884089 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654639175258 0.622163163488 105% => OK
Word variations: 68.0996778608 62.8969750728 108% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1666666667 16.4300151701 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2691832858 44.7399317507 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 90.9928171075 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.4300151701 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.613754768223 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 40.3934707904 37.5504026743 108% => OK
Elegance: 0.964705882353 1.13073093955 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117899997325 0.331212695627 36% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0863529488454 0.0927372745006 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0913193083963 0.0736520305886 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532598520464 0.579516596996 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.239565939829 0.180689518051 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501483703258 0.122183219658 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508156290609 0.0765303033291 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.163438699188 0.211926503985 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.08608510457 0.0737400523855 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111970091792 0.203819188451 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570955073553 0.067151250289 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 1.03092783505 291% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Some grammar issues.
Rates: 67.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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