Writing test
Writing task 1 (a letter)
You are very disturbed by the noise coming from a restaurant opened nearby recently. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say
– What problem do you experience?
– What should the management do about it?
– Describe what you will do if the problem is not resolved.
To,
The Manager,
Anmol Restaurant.
I am Divya Patel, Secretary of the AV Apartments located right next your restaurant. I am writing this letter to bring it into your notice that we hear a lot of noise coming out from your restaurant.
Loud music being played in the pub and people getting rowdy and creating nusance after drinking is a common site these days at your restaurant. And it gets really loud, when it’s expected to be quieter.
I would like to request you here to stop the sound post 23:00 hours and maybe install sound proof glasses wherever necessary. As you know it’s against the law to play loud music between 22:00 and 07:00. As well, would really appreciate if you could ask your clients to keep their voices to themselves, as they tend to get too loud after drinking.
I am expecting that you will consider my request and solve the issues within 1 week but in a case if you will fail in doing the same then I have to write a complaint letter to our local government body as well as our area's police station so they can take strict actions against you.
Hope to hear a positive reply from you.
Kind Regards,
Divya Patel
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, then, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61722488038 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32328061974 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665071770335 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2847758551 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145701483423 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464901023583 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563404854846 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826718439962 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513889103337 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.