you and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Essay topics:

you and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with reference to a night, when I have spent in your restaurant. Although my family and I used to have dinner in that place, I have not been there for long time. It seems that you have altered internal decoration, which is combination of modernity and tradition. Antique paintings, which have been hanging on walls and fascinating flowers on the tables are quite breathtaking and romantic. My classmates and I gathered in your location to celebrate one of my friends birthday. I should be grateful of your staffs, who were smiling on us, while we could not decide about our dishes and I really enjoyed of their coordinate. I should admit that except of the quality of your dishes, your prices are quite reasonable. Individuals can have the best meal whit suitable price. Personally will advice your restaurant to my colleagues, who are looking for a luxury place.
I would appropriate, I could introduce me your website to give more information about your working hours.

Yours Faithfully
S

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 801, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
...al whit suitable price. Personally will advice your restaurant to my colleagues, who a...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so, while, with reference to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94219653179 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83627193768 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664739884393 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.360824742268 831% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5539679369 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7272727273 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.067692153523 0.216113520407 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262765419134 0.0766984524023 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282405307124 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0392224602997 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392224602997 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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