You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter, give details of the job, explain why it is important to you, suggest that information your teacher could put in the reference.
Dear Prof.Bhavsar.
I am Ajay Patel from Electronics engineering batch 2009.I hope you remember me and this letter finds you well.
I am writing this letter to you as I need your letter of reference for my Job application. I have recently applied for a Telecom system specialist job in one of the leading Telecom Company.
I believe this is a lifetime opportunity for me. As telecom is my favourite subject since beginning and with this job profile It will open new doors of growth not only professionally but also financially.
As you were my teacher and project guide during my college tenure, I request you include my subject interest and my project work details in the recommendation. It would be helpful if you endorse my personal abilities and attitude in the letter.
I am sure your esteemed recommendation will help me to secure my position for this job.
I hope you will accept my request and send me the desired letter.
Yours Sincerely,
Ajaykumar PATEL
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 167 250 //you may put more content
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 167 250
No. of Characters: 779 1000
No. of Different Words: 101 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.595 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.665 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.872 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 57 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.351 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.37 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.192 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Bhavsar
Dear Prof.Bhavsar. I am Ajay Patel from Electronics engi...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...from Electronics engineering batch 2009.I hope you remember me and this letter fi...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ber me and this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to you as I need...
^
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er of reference for my Job application. I have recently applied for a Telecom sys...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n one of the leading Telecom Company. I believe this is a lifetime opportunity ...
^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252808988764 0.220444632235 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.140449438202 0.167888034529 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0561797752809 0.0606518309736 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0505617977528 0.0506257000042 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.179775280899 0.118615021944 152% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106741573034 0.107062808482 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0224719101124 0.041066498444 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93487274144 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0112359550562 0.0385302599488 29% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.061797752809 0.0714148451538 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0224719101124 0.0191574576366 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 972.0 1141.60824742 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.134020619 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85542168675 5.53046319177 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349397590361 0.284621296913 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295180722892 0.211203875043 140% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150602409639 0.133321485273 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0963855421687 0.0843313296314 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93487274144 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.622163163488 98% => OK
Word variations: 55.1108506599 62.8969750728 88% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0909090909 16.4300151701 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3607100043 44.7399317507 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3636363636 90.9928171075 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.4300151701 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.613754768223 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.09278350515 239% => OK
Readability: 44.6089813801 37.5504026743 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.0303030303 1.13073093955 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370109727312 0.331212695627 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102753179554 0.0927372745006 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0756594837726 0.0736520305886 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.79190561092 0.579516596996 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18769216232 0.180689518051 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139135000681 0.122183219658 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112474893899 0.0765303033291 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.132278971653 0.211926503985 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0307516672617 0.0737400523855 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193791849524 0.203819188451 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103909602841 0.067151250289 155% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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