You are going on a short holiday soon and would like to invite a friend to join you. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Explain why you need a holiday.
– Explain why you want your friend to come.
– Where and when do you want to go?
Dear Jhon,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to tell you that I am going to Larak island next month as usual and I am wondering to know if you would like to accompany me or not.
As you know, I was working flat out in order to meet the sales target and I was under heavy pressure at my job these days. Thus, I decided to let my hair down and get away from my daily grinding for a while. So, I plot this trip. I thoroughly know that you love this place and I will never forget our last memorable trip with each other.
Having said that, since I am traveling alone and you are extremely skillful at fishing, I am hoping that you can come with me to have fun with each other as well as lean from you about fishing more. The exact date is on 21th of November, the high season, and I decided to stay there about 10 days to do some sightseeing either. I look forward hearing good news from you soon.
Best wishes,
Elmira
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, well, while, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.05319148936 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0157820055 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670212765957 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8357547591 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254606166899 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883585078284 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789398983263 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182704436805 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749456752352 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.21 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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